- she places the knife on his throat,sheepishly lets out a smile before her hands starts to slice it open.
- she lets out a cry and begin to bang her head on the wall uncontrollably.
- “killing me won’t kill the beast!”she howls as she pulls the trigger.
- staring at the maggots feasting on the dead body,he grabs a handful of them before placing it in to his mouth.
- he pushes the door,mutters a few words and crawls out of the room holding a bloody eyeball in his right fist.
- he clutches his fist,shivering as he reaches into his bag and takes out a piece of paper that is stained with blood.
- she swallows back her tears,takes a deep breath and heads for the sea.
- perspiration streams down his forehead as he passes the white pill to him.
- she raises her hands to her cheeks,wipes away her tears and collapse.
- her body starts to tremble as she stares hard at her mobiles’ screen.
- his face expressionless as he walks out of the room with blood oozing out from his neck.
- with tears streaming down her cheeks,she lifts up the knife and plunges it into her heart.
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Good openers – you write well and really provide intriguing openers that are pretty specific but also have lots of potential for different paths to lead the story on. Good job!
Comment by theredpants — May 31, 2010 @ 6:56 am